This Track Has 2 Short Songs On It And This Is My First Time On Here So Please Dont Be Harsh...i Have Really , Well, Crap Equipment SO Please Dont Comment Too Much On The Equipment.

Okay I Will Not Comment On The Atrocious Production Quality And Just Tell You Want I Think Of The Songs...

I Think You Have Some Interesting Ideas In There But You Need To Work Them Out, Make The Songs More Cohesive, So To Say, Turn Them Into Actual Songs. Try Working Out Some Lyrics And Sing Them To Your Music.

So, I Did Not Rate This Upload, Since It Is Just Not There Yet... However, Well Done On The Effort, I Can Clearly Hear You Want To Rock Alright, SO Go Ahead And DO IT

Good Luck...

ps read the recording forum and learn how you can actually get a reasonable quality without too much investment. good luck. you have a whole life of rock, roll and groovin ahead of you. please take your time....