Enjoy it or else....

Lyrics

I am waiting in the dark and I
feel your eyes upon my soul
And the hate had to last cause we
never could forgive the wrong

We weigh the head against the heart
We drink the fear and we feel strong
Our choices are stark against
What was painted all along

Break Free, for the life inside of me
Break Free, for the pain thats meant to be

They say branded across the stars theres a mystery of destiny
But I wont be a part of this equation of eternity

Break free-4

Theres a truth that pervades my soul
And it has been muted all along
A captive of my conciensce
It's time to turn the volumes on

Break free, for the life inside of me
Break free, for the pain thats meant to be

They say branded across the stars theres a mystery of destiny
But I wont be a part of this equation of eternity

WooooOOOOOh-4

oh come on it aint that bad, lol.

like the vocals, some good parts in the vocals... some timing issues with the drums, yea its not to shabby ive listened to some of your other songs as well, alot have quite alot of potential but are let down by the production value, i'd invest in a better quality mic, but other than that good work

well this recording is great..so you got the software...well nice ly done...and great drums....the vocals are good...the guitar playing was slow but overall the effect is great...YOU SHOULD POST THE LYRICS...it help to review...

Its AIGHT could use some help which i can't give other than invest in some electric drums

I lived it

The recording quality lets down what could be a really decent track.
Backing instrumentation lost in the mix
Drums, although played ok, just don't quite go
Vocals are good, but the sound just isn't quite right - as if there's too much space between the mic and the mouth!

Tons of potential - a very well constructed piece that just needs to be re-recorded more professionally.

I have to say this sounds pretty good.... I agree with JiminUK though... THe quality is a bit disheartening.. and yeah, get some different drums!

                JimK

Couldn't say it any better myself so I won't

Fine voice. The thing is in mono in Left ear on song only.
The mix is OK. but difficult to tell with mono presentation

The thing is in mono in Left ear on song only.

And here I thought it was my crappy headphones acting up again, lol!

like the lyrics, like the piece. Better recording, and it will be good.

Not a bad song, however, I agree with the recording.
Maybe, you should upload the song again because I get it fine in mono, although the recording seems quiet.
When I flick to stereo on the headphones, I am getting it panning more to the right and not to the left as previously mentioned. It makes me wonder if the song has uploaded properly.
Overall though, a good song, well done.

kind agree with most. i think the mic is letting it down and think drums are dominating. love the vocals. got an interesting voice and are a great singer

Recording quality apart, a very enjoyable track.  Very interesting and unusual in a nice way