Turn up the vocals, give them a bit more punch

Guitar tone is great except it rises above the vocals and is kind of grating. Like every1 else said, fool around with the EQ. Get a fresh set of ears to help out

Brilliant lyrics, brilliant song

Five stars

this is a really rock'n tune, man, i dig it

Once again a belated thank you for all the feedback, much appreciated.
Unfortunately the band doesn't exist anymore but dammit we were alright while it lasted.