Think this sounds very progressive... quite different from the other songs I uploaded... different music, different vocals, hope you like it a bit.

Over domestic plain
I'll walk till I fall
and I won't restrain
the bitterness in my soul

the heavy rain drops on your shoulder
reflects your skin in the moonlight

you're crying but you still go
Secret sideways still ahead

Believe you know
the ground below your feet
be aware of the sorrows
around the corner down the path

the heavy rain drops on your shoulder
reflects your skin in the moonlight

you're crying but you still go
Secret sideways still ahead

Darkness may take
control of you
but don't dread the shadows
coz light illume the wood again

the heavy rain drops on your shoulder
reflects your skin in the moonlight

you're crying but you still go
Secret sideways still ahead

you're crying but you still go
Secret sideways still ahead

very progressive! could use drums/bass ofcourse, still very listenable, maybe work on the rhythm off the vocals some more?
I took a quick listen at some of your other songs,I wonder why you don't do drums or get a band?

I found this one a bit hard to get into, especially as it made me jump when it started!!!

Drums and bass would make a big difference, but it's not bad all the same.  The recording quality is good, but I just don't like the style very much so it's never going to be a favourite of mine