This one goes out to Iszil, it's not actually finished yet. But I thought I'd better put it up.

VERSE 1

Sometimes words disappear,
In relation to what's there,
And you don't say a word.

You are a red light and he is a car,
He runs right through all your scars.
And you don't know why.

CHORUS

When the earth is turning too,
Gravity is pulling you and crushing all your rhythm,
You find it hard to understand how things could get so out of hand,
Without you making a single decision.

VERSE 2

You wander, wondering for days on end,
Hoping some answer will impend on you,
But nothing appears,
You feel trapped inside the years you lost with him...

BRIDGE

And it fucking hurts I know,
But the pain inside will always show much whiter,
On the black spots of your life.

CHORUS

When the earth is turning too,
Gravity is pulling you and crushing all your rhythm,
You find it hard to understand how things could get so out of hand,
Without you making a single decision.

- Chester

Mud, you must make a 10.000.000% rating, cause this song f**king deserves it!
I loved this in the original version, and this one really killed me!
Shit, dude, I don't know what to say... I LOVE THIS SONG!
You rule, Chester! The best ever here on BandAMP.
Waiting for your next songs, and thanks for re-recording this one!

         > Iszil

Excellent! This is a great sounding song; everything works. Beautiful keyboard work, super singing, this one has it all.
You da man!

I'm glad you like this one, Iszil. Because it really is one of my favourites. Sadly I got way too fast in the chorus parts of this song, And the whole things could have been slowed down a bit anyway

Do you think I should put that light synth in the back like the original?

- Chester

Yeah, you could a light synth in the back... but make sure it's soft and subtle; nothing to loud, just like the original version.

       > Iszil

well great work EDu....its great..its the best...
its too good
very well done
i loved it
i loathe it
i can listen it to ages....
i like the part before the chorus...
the chorus makes the ears soundlike the chorus is too fast for the song...

every body break out your chester gear and wave your little "i love chester" flags because he's another hit by our beloved vocalist... cant you be imperfect like us mere morstals and make a song that doesnt get a grammy by the first couple of seconds into listening?

i must admit a very girly deatale.... i almost got a bit teary eyed during this... ALMOST! *hides her hankie quickly*

but yes erm, very good my dear man very good, keep it up and now im off to rate

the paper version of a doll
dolly

Great vocals,lyrics and musicianship.Total Package.I love the words you choose to paint a picture and get the point across. Another beautiful  song.

You are a red light and he is a car,
He runs right through all your scars.
And you don't know why


Brilliant

Seems like you write lyrics that people can easily (and deeply?) relate to:

Still I'm going to critique your lyrics here for a minute... Because... of reasons.

This here line is evident:

You find it hard to understand how things could get so out of hand,
Without you making a single decision.

Which is funny... because things do get out of hand when people don't make their own decisions in life, but how many people know that about themselves? And should they wallow in misery (inactive) or stand up for themselves, leading their own lives instead (active)...

missing the pop sound for this song.
Rerecord it in a pro studio and you'll win

I love this song!
I don't know what else to say...
Great grat great song....all the best!

It was soooo good i had to stop listening to it cuz i my never make my own music again

Wow, as usual loved it.  Im not big on piano based songs usually, but everyone of yours i've heard is great.

Lovely sound
Good recording
Great vocals
Excellent song!

Another masterpiece from the Chester stable

like this song,...
very touching,..
so comforting,..
nice recording,..

i was amazed by this creation,...

cool