Radio edit for Healthy Student... it is a new version, hope you enjoy!

as to the mix: the opening synth has an odd reverb (a bit tinny). i think the percussion would benefit from some stereo panning. vocals are a bit a too upfront in the mix for my taste, and maybe a bit dry. i think the bassier synth sounds could use a serious boost between 80 and 200 hz (for a dancier song it lacks a bit of an oomph in the low end).

as to the writing: i really dig your style. reminds me of good old goth, ebm, darwave. it's really nice and if i'ld hear it in a club i'd be dancing like total crazy. in fact, i think the chorus is the perfect dance track. do you like or know wolfsheim? reminds me a bit of it. great stuff. with a bit more attention to detail in the actual production this would be a stunning track.

all the best,
mark