#1April 3rd, 2006 · 02:51 AM
18 threads / 15 songs
147 posts
Italy
Wasting Love
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This song is not in a battle


I tried to write my very first love song ever!

(Still working on lyrics)

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#2April 3rd, 2006 · 12:12 PM
34 threads / 16 songs
538 posts
Mexico
god work!
Instrumentation is very convincing, well constructed... vocals not that much. 
Maybe some effect? or more complex lines?
#3April 3rd, 2006 · 03:00 PM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,079 posts
Netherlands
yes, you have an interesting style, most definately -

the synth 80-ish dark wave type sound, it's very interesting. drum sounds, as they start out, really great.

You might have wanted to effect the vocals more, so you could put them less to the front! or perhaps layer them a few times and then go for more stereo spread... also some harmonies wouldnt hurt.

nice, and interesting....
#4April 3rd, 2006 · 03:21 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,803 posts
Germany
I like it. like the 80s. kind of depeche mode. would do sth with the vocals. compressing too strong.
#5April 6th, 2006 · 09:39 AM
1 threads
18 posts
Italy
Ciao FRANZ!!!
#6April 6th, 2006 · 09:40 AM
18 threads / 15 songs
147 posts
Italy
#7April 7th, 2006 · 03:52 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
I do like the instruments blending in this - and the construction and recording quality is pretty good.
So far, I seem to be the only person posting on this song that actually likes the vocals! The melody is pretty good - singing's a bit "wobbly" in places but it doesn't detract from a pretty good song.

The only thing I don't like is the fade-out ending..... I never have done, and probably never will!
#8April 15th, 2006 · 11:18 AM
4 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
Canada
Nice, I'm really into this genre!  I do agree that a tiny bit of effects on the vocals in the beginning would be nice to help bring them back into the mix... I notice you did that later, and it worked well.  

Marg
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#9April 15th, 2006 · 11:08 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
4 posts
Australia
nice maybe work on vocals
#10August 1st, 2006 · 02:26 PM
25 threads / 23 songs
127 posts
United States of America
nice
Has some A. sawtooth to it, choise of sounds are dilightful

cheers

Rod
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