I tried to write my very first love song ever!

(Still working on lyrics)

Instrumentation is very convincing, well constructed... vocals not that much. 
Maybe some effect? or more complex lines?

yes, you have an interesting style, most definately -

the synth 80-ish dark wave type sound, it's very interesting. drum sounds, as they start out, really great.

You might have wanted to effect the vocals more, so you could put them less to the front! or perhaps layer them a few times and then go for more stereo spread... also some harmonies wouldnt hurt.

nice, and interesting....

I like it. like the 80s. kind of depeche mode. would do sth with the vocals. compressing too strong.

Ciao FRANZ!!!

I do like the instruments blending in this - and the construction and recording quality is pretty good.
So far, I seem to be the only person posting on this song that actually likes the vocals! The melody is pretty good - singing's a bit "wobbly" in places but it doesn't detract from a pretty good song.

The only thing I don't like is the fade-out ending..... I never have done, and probably never will!

Nice, I'm really into this genre!  I do agree that a tiny bit of effects on the vocals in the beginning would be nice to help bring them back into the mix... I notice you did that later, and it worked well.  

Marg
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nice maybe work on vocals

Has some A. sawtooth to it, choise of sounds are dilightful

cheers

Rod