Yeah just some other riff...
I have to record all my song in one shot so I can never had solos or work more on voice cause I play guit at the same time.

Oh yeah...I case you care...

And I don't even know what I'm doing here
Sitting, Waitting...for you to come
Pretending I'm having fun
With evrybody walking aroud
Guess they're all tryin to find
Someone to get down

And you don't even know that I'm dying here
While your dancing and laughing and having fun
Smilying to evreyone
Who only wan't to on down
As if you're only fooling around....

ok....


  dude... sweet!

       tight guitar.... nice timing... cool feel... very well played....

    I wonder, why is it you have to record in one shot?  are you hiding out from the government in a secret place, and can only record for a  short time or you will be heard and tracked?  hehehehe.... seriously, what's up?  I mean if it's because you have no real hardware, that is no excuse dude, I am using Audacity(free software) and the line in on my stock soundcard...as well, as a 3 dollar web mic... so I don't want to hear no complaining.. hahaha....   Anyway...  I would really like to hear this with a better vocal track, cause dude, from what I can hear, you can sing...

        Basically love the song, don't like the fact that I can't hear ya blow man...
                                Jim "Tamborine man" K

Hey!

Thanks a lot my friends!
When I say record in one shot I meant like, only one track. Like ... I can't play on top of a prevously recorded track and so. So you can only ear the song as I play and sing it at the same time and I can't add solo guitar tracks or gazoos or anything!
Sorry bout that my English vocab is not as good as my french...

hi, good song, nice singing.

But i think Jimk tries to tell you that yo can record with software on your PC, so you dont have to record in 'one shot' anymore.
And that would be worth it!
Hope the english is easy enough now
Good luck!

Max

jack johnson influence?
Very well played, i reckon this is perfectly parallel to jack johnsons style, your voice, even the rhythm of the acoustic guitar!
really good.
I really like your voice, its truely good (if you didn't already figure that out when i said your voice sounds like Jack Johnson)
Now you must entertain us for more than 1min 26 seconds...

Well done you got talent but now i think you should put a bit more effort into the song and the production etc.

flesh out the melody and do a better recording! You've got a good song here!

Nice tune. Short but nice.
Try to complete it.

        > Iszil

do you write this song??

Yes I did.

Why? does it remind you of an other song or something?

It was nice but the slow start and the shortness kind of drug it down but other than that it was pretty solid 4/5

The guitar playing is good, the lyrics and your voice is really good, but if you was able to get it recorded better (as in record the acoustic guitar and your vocals seperatly then mix them so they meet in the middle) you would have a really good song.  Good Job!