This is an other start of a song...seems I can never finish one...
Anyways, let me know i you like the feel of it or not!

Thanks..

btw, sorry bout the picture there...

Jp

indeed the beginning of a song  -

the feel (as soon as your vocals set in) made me think of Educatedguess - which is good by default.

Your strumming style is okay, but your voice could use more control. There should be thread in the Pit called "He had no underwear!" by Porcelaindoll which has some vocal training suggestions and links in there. You might want to check it out.

So okay, song has potential, since the feeling is really nice, but it requires umm, finishing ofcourse and such...

so, good luck!

PX

accoustic guitar came tru very nice

need some work your voice but is ok, is very short the track but I gonna listen when you finish ok,that sounds good