I was trying something out and this came to mind.

so.., youve played guitar over a nice drumbeat, which you recorded/mixed awfully,(btw. is there a bass? i couldn't hear it) and you called it Dbmg..?

ok, it's a nice tune, but to make a nice song of it, with a beginning, a theme and things like that and a proper end..., it does need some work i guess

Youve got a start here though!

Good luck

I'm not getting the title either,

but I happen to really enjoy this weird soundscape. I must say I'm currently listening on small pc speakers (I'm not at home ATM) so I can't really judge for sound quality. It may sound good right now, but when I get home and listen through my headphones I may have a different opinion.

It's a bit spacy... distorted space rock perhaps? I dunno... there's plenty of niceness in there... now let's hear some vocals and turn it into a real song?

i am not liking this surf strom static deal going on thru the entire song....is that a synth or just white noise from bad production? whatever it is it needs to go....the drums are nice, id like them out front more.....nice guitar tone, and tune, needs more instrumentation, and the song does not feel as if it goes anywhere.....try to come up with a transition or two  to give us a sense of change

thanks guys Yes it needs work and all suggestions taken well. no you're right the song does go no were, and as far as the white noise it was my old pro co rat, it's seen better days. and when recording i had levels to high and made for to much distortion.