guitar and singing. this song was written last summer.

We got just a very basic setup... which gives really average sound quality but we have a serious problem with this clicking and ticking stuff, i've looked around and you guys seem to know what you are talking about so maybe you can help me

sounds pretty cool
love the melody!
interesting lyrics.... do you know motor ace at all? can't believe they broke up... i was in sydney on the night they played in melbourne....
anyway... good song!

sounds good, nice and simple, but the vocals could be a bit quieter.

Would sound good with a full band. Good as it is as well though.

I'm missing a fatter sound here. Guitar sounds a bit weak in the back of the mix. 

I would add some harmonies to the guitar parts and some bass as well.

It has potential to be a great song!

Sounds pretty funky!
The idea is good, but you must make a song with drums and bass and all that kind of things. That would work great.
The sound quality isn't very good.

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