riffs and structure by me, band did their share, was complete rocky at first but i felt for a 'ska' feel in it :P


GLOWING UNDER (lyrics by Lawrence Payne)

What is this?…what’s falling down?…
What’s all this falling underground?…
Don’t remember rolling over?…
Forgot to hide the ceiling…
This is where it all begins…
Remember to all come closer…
Forgot to mention meaning…
Tie me up or hall me in & see what’s glowing under…

All I judge is my being…Red…just as I am…
Close to finding a name…Running around the brain…
It’s bound to happen again…still the need to point & blame…
The Never-ending question: Why?…
A smudgy grudge on my being fudged…
Another hardened man?…here we go again…on&on&on…

To learn there’s lots more under…Our Universal Sea…
It’s hard understanding emotions inside you & me…

See what’s glowing under…Can’t you see what’s glowing under my skin?…
See what’s glowing under…Can’t you see what’s glowing under…within?…

Can’t be the same…Why the need to point or blame…
The Never-ending question: Why?…
All I judge is my being scared…just as I am…
Give the thing a name…Yes, here we go again!…

I’m not quite Mr. Bright…but you can see right…
Someone meant everything to me…
So, I didn’t mean that kind of everything to that someone…
See you sometime again then?…When?…
Well, I guess we’ll have to shine a little later then…

Song has kinda of retro punk feel but with real  nice musical harmony and flow.  The break into the slower part gives it a whole new dimension to it which I think works really well. It kinda lifts  you out of the forest to see the trees for a moment and throws you back into woods.  This respite intensifies the edge and sweetens the effect of the whole song.  Nice original style. Excellent rock voice.  I can mentally cut and paste your vocal style on to a lot of American and British classic rock tunes.  I would love to the read lyrics.  Dan, NB

wow great work on that. the bass line is cool. vocals are awesome!!!!

Well Slam me on the punk dance  floor.
Vocals really capture a tone, bands energy rocking ,go for it 

it has the same kind of energy that some intro tunes to the more fresh sitcoms have.

I like it... In places, some shakyness between bass/drums, in fact the entire bass play isn't as tight...

really nice song this. energetic, nice to hear this in the morning to get into a good mood.

well done

tnx guys, always nice to hear your compliments and critics.

Accidentily i found the lyrics, so(Newbreed) there they are for this song.(on top of the page.
( i'll try and post them on the other songs too)

Btw. In 'real' life i got a lot of critics on the ska guitar, nice to find that in here people are less narrow about that

Ok Max  I needed some kick ass music to get me going this morn...and here it is...I lke this alot..Im going to vote it and add it to my playlist
You Rock Max...I like the change at th 1:17 Mark....Then back to the power at 1:37 or so....nice recording....good sound comming from my speakers...Nice time frame on the song...not to long...it leaves you wanting more....MORE & More
Nice work Max...good vocals buddy

Flyer

The guitar tone rocks and has nice rhymthm to it, but I don't like the lead tone (though I am wearing headphones).

Vocal melodies rock.
Bit too much reverb in the mix on possible the guitar and vocals for my liking and maybe too much on the drums though that may change if you mixed the others down.

Other than that, yes lets go dance

Sorry for bad English, i hope? you understand? what i wont to say

Sounds like punk but something wrong with it -- but i like it, unkindly i cant say in English what i don't like in this song

its sound very Bright to (sorry, i don't know how it in English)

no emotions! --- it must be more ....... more screaming, i think. or more (and it word? i don't know too )

and sorry for my bad English

Positive. Energetic. Nice tempo!