i wrote this song about 2 months ago and have had it sitting on my comp. its all me baby basically. i didnt use and editing programs with this song so tell me how you think it sounds and any feedback would be great.

Nice, tune.  I especially enjoyed the part about 3/4's the way into it when it really picks up.  I think a cool idea might be if you added just a touch of effect to either the rhythm or the lead track to slightly color them for an added contrast.  Pretty neat that you pulled that off without editing.  Regards Dan

Had good recording quality and timing. Sounded like a very skilled piece, but it should be a little longer. It would be cool to hear more from you.

LunchTray

thanks for the post. thats what everyone says when they hear it. that was good. now play the rest. thatnks for the sugggestion,

Whoa, did you lay two guitar tracks over each other or are you just that cool?

Both. . I combined two tracks when i recorded it.

thats really great..love the beinning it was good..the sound was good and i didnt hear any freeback.great job..


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