a french track talkin about  dead crazy rat

The distortion ruins it. Too strong vocals. The speaker raises his voice to add something.
Quiet is always better in recording because you can crank it in the freeware later. Turn down the recorder.
I like the approach, people speaking over another playing a guitar. Life as art. 
This try fails for one reason:
The distortion makes it unlistenable.

Interesting concept...i'm not quite getting it though. The mic is way too loud and distorted.

Yes....

    The mic is too hot.... ruins this....


     Otherwise, it has potential.... I like the idea....  I am diggin it.... just re-do it, and turn down the mic, and mix it a bit better.. then re-post it...  great idea...

 
               Ukelele Jim

lolll its all improvised by me and my friend a day when we didn't know what to do and we have just do its for fun with my mp3 player

ps: my English is to bad because I'm a Canadian Frenchmen 

Since this was just a lark I shouldn't get too critical, though i agree that the recording quality is dreadful.This reminds me of those spoken word poetry slams that were huge a few years ago. Cool concept but since I can't understand much French, I'm sure I'm un-qualified to comment on the lyrics . BTW, your English beats the shit out of my French.

your song is very nice because the lyrics is beautiful and guitar to.pis pk me privé de parler en frencais haha             rat trisomique mort

Godness...!!    I really hope you you two very bored that day because this is not music, c'mon  sorry