Remixed version based on input from Band Amp. Couldn't clear the 5+ minute mark suggested.
Brought up the vox, which lead me to change the lyrics. Re-arranged the Guitar, etc. The sample is still in the back.
Dark Exploration of Coupling. The union as a place of forming habits.

dark and atmospheric soundscape...

indeed more interesting than the previous version...

cool -

job well done... it's more a song now... slow... brooding...

*applauds*

*downloads*

Not bad. Not my style of music but I will vote. Pretty good quality.  I think the mixing could be done better. Vocals aren't bad but could use some work. I like the guitar riff that overlaps the song. Keep it up.

i couldn't help but chuckle over the "little squeaky" noise in it, it sounded like a deranged chipmunk on speed. it made me smile. haha but i like this very much. i like the vocals. will add to playlist! and say hello to deranged chipmunk on speed for me. how much did you pay him to sing that part for you?

very well done
I enjoyed a lot

Rod