still in progress but what do ya think?

really like this mood reminds me also a little bit of Nick Drake.
You have overdubt your vocal,..thats i nice effect(sort of natural delay.
Keep up the good work.
 

hey thanks

youve got a good voice, very soothing. did you put any effect on the guitar (chorus of something?). i think it might sound better in a clean acoustic tone, the song is good enough.

this song is clean, mixed well. the chorus sounds wonderful and blends well with your voice.

Nice guitar tone. And the Vocals sound great. Nice and mellow. Almost a Pink Floyd feel. real cool.

it's beautiful, a great track.

I love those lyrics... you are a great lyricist, definately

all this needs is some minimalist hand percussion (like shakers / tambourine or so) and it'll be perfect.

although I can hear a full electric band version in there too if I close my eyes...

ok...