#1March 10th, 2006 · 11:42 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
7 posts
United Kingdom
Me, Myself and I

This song is not in a battle

This is my second song, your comments helped, and i hope this song is better!

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#2March 10th, 2006 · 11:53 AM
37 threads / 25 songs
237 posts
United States of America
very nice lyrics...keep workin 
#3March 10th, 2006 · 01:22 PM
188 threads / 27 songs
2,825 posts
there's some expression coming from your voice that I do like. For me the music isnt that good. Sounds like you're escaping. lyrics are nice.
#4March 10th, 2006 · 02:46 PM
77 threads / 59 songs
920 posts
that background synth is way to soft, but that's the least that should be remixed 
Liked your voice a lot, sung very well too, nice melodies!
the songstructure could be better, or arrangements could enhance things a bit,
but a nice try! now make a convincing good song of it!
#5March 11th, 2006 · 02:25 PM
15 threads / 14 songs
140 posts
United Kingdom
Your voice is very nice; Madonna-esque in parts. There are a few mistakes in the vocals which tend to stand out all the more because this is very much a vocally driven song.

I quite like the song structure. Nice melody and vocal arrangement IMO.

The music itself is lacking but as a vehicle for your voice it does okay.

Promising song.
#6March 11th, 2006 · 02:54 PM
4 threads / 2 songs
45 posts
Hey, you have a nice voice, so sing it out!  And I do agree the supporting instruments could be louder in the mix... and the detuned guitar just isn't doing it for me.  But yeah, keep it up, I wanna hear more.

check out "marula"
#7March 12th, 2006 · 10:16 AM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,086 posts
this song is definately better (thanks to the drums)

your voice sounds more confident. I like that chord progression... nice lyrics, again your voice is stronger - and true the arrangement is skeletal, but it works.

so keep it up

I rated this song nicely
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