This is the 1st time I'm posting a song here so I hope you like it. If you listen to it please tell me what did you think of it 'cause I'd really like to know other people opinions. The lyrics and voice are mine. We still have to do some changes in the music anyway.

Going Down On You

The heart of a stranger
Beating slowly in my head
Pumping pain into my veins
Giving sadness to my life.
‘Cause I know he will be there
‘Cause I know he will see me
Wherever I go.
I can’t run away from problems
They will chase me everytime
I try to move on
And forget.
They just won’t let me pass
Without saying a word.
I think I’m going down again.

Then I’m all alone in the dark
Wiping tears which don’t exist
Or weren’t supposed to.
And I see your face
And I hear your voice
And I feel you coming.
Oh, no...
I think I’m going down again.

Memories of you
Walking on my footsteps
Chasing me all over
They won’t leave me alone.
What was once will be forever.
I think I’m going down again.
Oh no, I think I’m going down on you again.

You come through my dreams
You can read my mind
You know where I am
You are where I go.
I try to erase
All we were together
But we still are.
And I think I’m going down again.

When I walk alone
I can feel you breathing
Right there next to me
You’re all I can see.
You’re the darkest of my nightmares
You’re the brightest of my dreams.
Please, go away
I have nothing more to say.
‘Cause I think I’m going down again.
I loved you and hated you
I wanted you and did not.
You were the perfect guy
All I did never need.
You were making it bad
Because you were too good,
I didn’t deserve you
And still I love you.
Oh no, I’ve just said it...
I really think I’m going down again.

Oh, I think I’m going down on you again.

Great title!!!  Did you intend it to have two meanings? 

As far as the song is concerned - well, it's not very well recorded!  The instrumental sounds   lack bass and sound very fake.  Your vocals sound as if they were recorded in a box!

That's the bad news over   As far as the construction of the song is concerned, I think it's pretty sound - quite good actually.

Your singing is fine - voice is nice.

I'd like to hear this one recorded properly - it would lift the whole song, I believe.

Yeah I know it's really badly recorded. It was recorded with my computer's microphone so it couldn't be very good. The title can have as many meanings as you want :P

uma portuguesa aqui?!not exactly my style but work on it..good piece in fact

real good song I hear it in my head. lots and lots of vocal harmonies on certain notes in the chorus. Like a mtv style  while you lay the main vocal track  pump up the beat.
kick in some scratch. some guitars with edge and you got you a hit.

at least in my head i hear it  good job.


 
but i hear voices in  there to lol.
                                           Greg