This is a quite a cute track - a little amusing, ironic, sardonic but ultimately hopeful.

I've had to cut out the solo - and the seemingly endless harmonies of the end (actually my favourite part, but they couldn't stay!).

It is very quiet (sorry!). TURN IT UP NICE AND LOUD!

The slightest hint of a sound........:shake: 

I think it is very good.  I wish you didn't cut the song shorter, because it's a little too short and just kinda leaves ya hangin'. 

I think the quietness of the song gives it a nice feel though!

Too quiet

Too quiet

Too quiet

I really do think that think would be better with the solo and at least some of the harmonies of the end- at the minute it just cuts off way too quickly at the minute.

Other than that I  love the song + was on the verge of downloading it so i could let my friends hear it but it just doesn't finish properly to me

i like the tune, it is to short
look forward to hearing the whole thing