War? War? War? War?
This was recorded with my best friend Mike (Drummer) when we played in Third Wing.  There is only one guitar track and no BASS. This is played in standard tuning and if anyone wants to put a bass track or anything else on this track, be my guest. I will post the lyrics at a later date if anyone wants me too but they are pretty easy to understand.
 
 I wrote this song after September 11Th. I guess this is me saying that I don't like war. I think there is better ways to come up with world solutions....................I'm not pointing fingers, but isn't that how we were supposed to be raised?

I don't think this will offend anyone but if it does......................................too bad.  Enjoy

All criticism very welcomed!!!

i cant make out a word you are saying so it doesnt offend me...i like the guitar riff, i like the vocal melodies...not my type of  music but interesting and energetic

Lyrics

Verse 1

Who you talking too? 8X

Verse 2

Your talking too yourself! 4X

Verse 3

Underneith yourself
Over someone else
No one needs your help
Believe in yourself

Chorus

We don't need your wars
Can't stand it anymore
Don't see your reasons
Ability is just a chore

Give no more
Understand we plead sore
No chance, no reason
It's straight up treason

Verse 1

Who you talking too? 8X

Verse 2

Your talking too yourself! 4X

Verse 3

Underneith yourself
Over someone else
No one needs your help
Believe in yourself

Chorus

We don't need your wars
Can't stand it anymore
Don't see your reasons
Ability is just a chore

Give no more
Understand we plead sore
No chance, no reason
It's straight up treason..................

End

Yourself

Alright. Not quite my style, and reasonably rough. With a more direction and a bit more focus on lyrics you might have something better though. The guitar riff is nice, but the lyrics are bland and too overt to contain any sort of deeper meaning other than -> war is bad. I'd suggest scrapping the rhyme scheme in a lot of places and focus on creating a stonger idea before concreting it in lyrics. The recording is also rough but I really don't know anything about that. Really not my style but bearable at least.

one thing i can tell, as a young sound recorder: this guy isn't scared of the mic! and that's something

keep it up!
 

Not my favorit style but it's got something going...
I'd like it more if the yelling was louder at the end...the signer should just go nuts...

Not bad

maintain the rage