Here is one of the songs with the same characteristics: Recorded directly to the PC with a mic, in one take.

I upload it to share my creation, if you don´t like it tell me what you could do in my place.

I´m remaking this and the other songs, with all your advices, so hurry up to destroy this and you will be considerate in the next


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ok,
 
  You explained that it is one take directly to pc.. so I will not criticize too much on the quality.. but would love to hear this redone with seperate guitar and vocal tracks and mixed well.. I also would like to hear a second guitar part doing some interesting little walking around the fret board occasionally... nothing to much, just an occasional little frill..

   Otherwise it sounds good...  The playing is fairly tight...  considering it is one take.. I was impressed..   most of my guitar work is one take... I do not like to re-record just part of it.. If it isn't right, I want to make it all over again till it is right..  I am weird I know...
  Anyway.. great job!  and again, try to re-do it as seperate tracks, get closer to the mic, and then compression is the key.. mix, and bake at 350 err.. wait, that's my recipe for muffins.. anyway...  You get the idea.. 
                 JimK 

hey JimK i want the recipe too

lol

thanx

practice this a lot, experiment with the vocals, then do what JimK says and you'll have a great song
good luck 

loosey goosey, be more adventurous with the vocals,
has great potential 

Not bad. Take your time when you load, record and mix your music if you want to hear more positive feedback. If not I'm sure you can find someone who would love to record your stuff for you for a case of beer or a left handed cigarrette.  Keep it up Dodosito. I enjoyed it.

yea i think it has potential but its let down the recording, but good effort

thanks for all your comments, in fact, now i´m working on the song, I recorded all the tracks and micosis will mix it

this cool Dod    The recording is rough  ... was breaking up some.... Good song though,...
but I got the feel of the song/music/your singing and the lyrics...not bad  man  I like it
Keep it going

Ralph

like this one. would like to know what the lyrics are,think you could post em in english?
if not,doesnt matter, still like it.

hmmm dodo i like your voice your did a good job on the vocals maybe if you did the seprit tracks it would be easyer to here you speak, because your voice sounds kinda muffled... i wonder what the vocals would sound like threw a high pass filter... hmm... interesting... any way keep up the good work! i liked this alot!

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