Days of loneliness |
Hy, I caught a cold yesterday so my voice isn't in the best condition so don't be too harsh on it, but I think it's OK even like this. Please put your comments!
Nice mood. Needs a bit of work in mixing and timing. But all in all thumbs up for this.
Very smooth...
I really enjoyed this one... I agree the mix is off a bit, and it does sound like you have a cold a bit... re-do this with better vocal, and better levels, and wow....
As for the clip at hand, well, let me say, I still like it... I think it is very well done...
The guitar playing is top notch... as Triton said there is a timing issue, but it is minor...and actually kind of works in favor of the song... but overall great job...
JimK I have rated this song...
I really enjoyed this one... I agree the mix is off a bit, and it does sound like you have a cold a bit... re-do this with better vocal, and better levels, and wow....
As for the clip at hand, well, let me say, I still like it... I think it is very well done...
The guitar playing is top notch... as Triton said there is a timing issue, but it is minor...and actually kind of works in favor of the song... but overall great job...
JimK I have rated this song...
well there are definately slight timing and level balance issues - and you definately need 1) compression and 2) equalisation on your vocals... but it's not bad at all!
and the tune is pretty enjoyable. I like that funky pop.... or poppy funk... whatever to call it. has some cliche moves in there but that comes with the style...
so, well work on your recording techniques and all will be well
and the tune is pretty enjoyable. I like that funky pop.... or poppy funk... whatever to call it. has some cliche moves in there but that comes with the style...
so, well work on your recording techniques and all will be well
very nice beat to it
i think that it was well put together and well sung
well done
i think that it was well put together and well sung
well done
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