a little tune i wrote this morn ,,,,trying to get back to writing

sweet man - nice clean technique.
How about if you throw an atmospheric rhythm section on there with a cool instrumental melody . i don't know where you want to take it but that's what i hear. Can't wait to hear where you take it.

I really like this.....My preference is to hear some of your lyrics and your vocals with this, and, to my tastes...it's complete. I really don't think it needs any additional instrumentation. This could be one of your quieter, more introspective songs.

Yah, this is very nice playing. Indeed a minimalist poetic lyric would fit very well to it. and maybe a tambourine or some other minimal acoustic percussion... very nice!

the sample looks really nice ... if you can put in bass and some soft sweet drumming, can turn out to be even better ... put some slow vocals ... thats wat i think ... and as Alerion said .. i dont know where you want to take it .. hit me up with the complete version though ...

ok work in progress then...................

i wont vote for this unless u ask

splash

Beautiful melodies, but need lyrics.
The playing is very good.

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we will see