This is the first song me and my guitarist recorded and i think it's pretty good for our first time actually sitting down and record some of the things we had been workin on... the quality is kind of crap but other than that i think it sounds pretty good....tell me whut u think

Good tune,..but there isnt any brigde so as a suggestion :2x f and then 2x g.
Then youve got it more like a song perhaps,...good luck

I must agree, needs a bridge...   It is cool though... 

  Got me wanting to hear more.....   I know you got a drummer man.. and a bass, play that funky music man....   
 
            JimK

It's not alike, but it reminds me to the song that I recorded with my brother Dodosito. So only because of that it sounds great
No, I really mean it, it sounds good for a demo, and those mates are right on the changes they suggest.