This is one of the first songs I wrote when i started out but i changed some things anddropped the tuning down into C....Sounds pretty peaceful and depressing to me....tell me whut u think

Pretty cool.....

   I like the sound effects of the chopper, and how you brought it back in at the end...

     I think this song even though I think it is supposed to offer a loneliness and despair feel, I still think it needs some percussion...   nothing radical, just something soft in the background.. I could almost hear it in my head as it was playing...  otherwise, it could be cut down in time, and used as a good filler on stage... but is a great dark piece...

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                            JimK         I have rated this song....

thats sweet i reckon it will sound even better with a harmonising melody behind it

true you say dude, its depressing ... maybe u can fiddle with the second half of the riff and tune it up a bit ... rest all looks great ... hope to hear a better version soon ...

i don't want to be depressed..............it doesn't even do that .............sounds like someone demonstrating a flanger in a guitar shop.................where are the lyrics..............no lyrics no song......u describe it as a song.............a song must have lyrics...check the dictionary..........a bit hard from me i know..........work in progress i think.............no vote

listen to others on the site and then decide when u want to upload your ideas

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