This song reflects the common phrase 'The one saving grace' in a situation.
Just me on my acoustic with a bit of vocal layering, not sure if that sounds good, or just not. Your comments please!

Vocals need some leveling, clipping issues exist, other than that, congrats, you have a great tune and song! recording is not the best but I like the organic feel of the song texture. Keep it up!

wow....  I agree the levels are off on the vocals.. but overall a great composition...
       JimK    I have rated this song.... 

Nice clean guitar sound with very simple strumming that flows well.  The vocal line is also pretty nice, and it's sung fine.

It's just a pity about the vocal clipping, which spoils the feel.  If this were an analogue recording, you could have got away with it - but ouch!

I like the guitar, I like the vocals, I like the structure; I like the song

those high voices are great ! good song too ! the rest is being said..

Thanks for your comments, I will take them on board and I want to rework this song with a band I'm hoping to get together, and with someone who knows how to better record stuff so I don't get the clipping!

smart song, i like it! you can develop it and get a very good theme!

good stuff, the enthusiasm really shows with the progressive volume increases, a little bit of leveling in the vocals outta help, keep it up

Hi there thanks for the comment .I just used my acoustic Compania`and a Johnson or something ;my friends. There is something wrong with the wab or my Pc but i can't listen to your song it's makin this funny buzin noise.

Good luck with the makin of music and Keep on goin.

Oh yeah , If you if you have any words or vox Feel free .

"may the force be with you"

I really like your voice. I don't know what you are using to record but there are some issues with levels. I love the guitar. I like the song. Very nice.