A kind of intro i just made ... Isnt that conventional i guess ... tried to make sumthin different ... suggestions/comments all welcome...
Peace.

I think it's quite nice for an intro but not enough for a song (tell me about it  )

So, I like the mood and the ambience you've created here. Nice arrangements. I hope to hear a finished version soon.

Hey bro
Uve made something great...
i like the delayed riffs (very Wes Borland-ish) and the grooves ure trying to make here...
Just give it some time and complete it...im sure its gonna be a disasterpiece...
Rock on man
m/

Thanks All. Yeah Im gonna work on in and show u guys the real thing ...  Hang on ....

Some good effects here. That delay one sounds great.
I didn't like the drums; too simple, and I don't like them cause the sound like hip-hop percussion. Also the song is short... you should make a real song structure of this. I feel like a bit of influence of David Gilmour on the guitar, but those drums kill that feeling.
And I feel as if the guitar were out of tune.
But there's some potential here.

       > Iszil

work in progress...................v nice but no vote yet

Great start - nice sounds for the guitars and bass.
This is a good introduction to something else- and you say it's an intro; where's the "something else"?
Looking forwards to hearing the rest.
Oh btw, the quality of the recording is very good.

Nice... Would almost like to use this myself....  Could find something maybe to incorporate this into... some freaky collage or maybe just swing into a nice hard core riff...  But I digress, it is an intro... not really a song... so should not really be in the battle...

            really cool though....
                 JimK I have not rated this song.

i like it alot, think its a well good start, should definately work on that

cool, but the combination on rhythm, bass line and lead guitar until 0:55 is very much done before.

so you probably subconsciously copied an existing groove... really I need to find out which song that was again but it's pretty well known.

as for the rest - piano - and intro, and later on guitar... well I think the intro is pretty interesting

sorry, I don't mean to be harsh... I find it a reasonably enjoyable listen, so i rate accordingly.

.... minus the "already in existance" thing...

Quite nice sound quality, but i have to agree with others here (bit of a pointless comment then but oh well).
Its only an intro, or maybe an intro and verse, so shouldnt really be battling. But actually, does it say anywhere that music in the battle should be a complete song,
most of the stuff on this site is work-in-progress.
Anyway, to me this sounds very like Limp Bizkit or Crazy Town or something like that. But you should finish this, its a nice start!!

after listening to this i fed my biological mixer Kraftwerks "Radioactivity" and Alan Parsons "Eye in the sky"...is it possible that my vinyl has adapted at a geometric rate and can now actually reproduce...?
 The answer is obviously NO.....BUT...if that could happen....you would be its offspring....
as compliments go...what more could one say?

cool intro.  just lengthen it and add a few things and you could have a really good song.  you could also just lengthen it and you would have a kick ass instrumental.

Butterfly sugar baby,...but overall:good
though not worked out as it will become a song ,...please try to add a bridge or at least vocals,..  or otherwise a interesting instrumental,..Good luck