Hi volks!
With this song two friends of mine a.k.a. The Reward
participated in talentconest.
My best part is more the piano rather than singing. if you have suggestions for improvement or comments...
just go ahead.

Maybe some bass??

Are those drums too loud or its just me? I really liked them tho, nice groove. As for the vocals, I think they could be sang in a more convincing way.

Great potential.  Keep on.

Yeah, you need some powerful bass, but the rest is fine.

       > Iszil

potentially a very good song...............

no vote this time as it is work in progress

bass sorely needed

then pads and maybe some horns?

splash

Great concept! Jazzy, got my head bobbin'! If the music moves ya, it has done its job IMO. Bass needed eventually to get this baby to the top.

hmmm.....

    Pretty neat song... yeah, I said neat....   but there is something really missing...

     I think I agree with the Fish on this one....  Bass.... funky slap bass,  yeah...  definitely.

                   So, slap some bass in there, and call it a remix....
                                       JimK   I have rated this one....