Hey .

This is a 1 minute long instrumental kind of intro... but we don't know what we wanna do after it.. make it a real song or just let it be a 2 min instrumental song...

perhaps you guys got some suggestions?

greetz

RazoR

You might sell this to a film producer. This tune is great for such things.

After this intro I can hear a huge string orchestra playing a catchy melody while the background music continues. And at last I would end this with the piano that started the tune.

Fine work. Go ahead. Hope I could help a bit

That might be a good idea indeed . Do you think it should stay instrumental? or also vocals?

very somber mood-i liked the guitar part-expand on the instrumental idea but have it escalade to a powerful rock theme w/electric guitars-just an idea.

I agree with newmextex, can definitely hear some hevy riffs with distorted guitars.  I liked this idea,  think it could be a great song.

This sounds great. As for a movie, like TK said it very well.
Those synths are pretty well, and that guitar solo really fits with the song, but you should make a longer version, to make a whole song out of this, cause the idea you have here is pretty good and I can imagine a nice structure after this.
Nice work.

        > Iszil

Thank you all for all the positive replies . Yeah I think we should make it longer now, creating a rock piece might be a good idea . I'll let you know when we have advanced

RazoR

RazoR, you are the reason I joined today.
I found this site yesterday [a fluke methinks] and pretty much lurked for a while, listened to a few artists and today found you.

This is brilliant!
You must finish it, you simple must!  lol
There are various ways that this particular piece can go and would fit in amazingly... I think it's quite diverse really.  I can hear it in a film... can hear a soft vocal in the background ... and yes, can even agree to what MexTex said about there being an escalating to a powerful rock theme and all.
This is just magnificent and I wish you great luck in where you wish it to go.
Hugs

~AGem

Thanks a lot . Glad that you like it . I'll let you know when it's finished . I wish you all the luck with your music, and hope to hear some of it someday .

RazoR (Steven)

Is it ready yet?  Is it ready yet? Have you finished this piece? lol
Just teasing.
I know you cannot rush these such things... It's got to come with time, the right moment, the right emotions.

Take care of you, Steven.

If i close my eyes i can really fantasize about the most beautiful things (at least for me)
So listen to me and finish it.
another question do ya play live as well, and if so tell me where, i will be on the front row.

greets Chevalric

Hey Chevalric .

Glad to hear you like our stuff .

Yeah we are planning to play live someday of course, but we first have to finish enough songs to accomplish that . But I will let you know when we will play live!!

RazoR

It's been quite a while since I've come around to this place...
I had to replay this piece as it is one of my favourites.
Still makes me smile and hum the tune, though it saddens me that it's so short. Leaves me wanting it to go on and on.  lol
I hope you are well, Razor and that your music is flourishing.
[hugs]

Finish it! Turn it into a "real" song, with vocals.

This has such a good feel to it.  It's a lovely blend of instrumental sounds, that promises loads.

So as I said at the start .......
                Finish it!!