I can't write lyrics.
I can't record on my computer cause its being a moose.
So this is all I have for now. I have another few songs with no lyrics but this ones my fave.
I figured out how to use Fruity Slicer! Tis awesomeage! 

Hey, you a got a cool basis for a song here. I really loved the chord progression!
That piano really sounds great... I feel this as if Vangelis or Yanni were trying to make some electronic music, so this, for me, is very good.
Those drums sounds awesome, and that guitar as well.
Write some lyrics for this or ask for International Collaboration and you will make a hit out of this.
You are a real expert with FL.
Keep this up!

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