kinda a throw away. something i've had rattling around in my head for a while so recorded it quickly and threw down some improv guitar lines. my band mate says he'd like to put some lyrics over it but i think it does ok as an instrumental?

full title is 'Emo Boy Surfing On An Ocean Of Tears'

Definitely lyrics... it has potential. If you really don't want to add vocals try adding some melody to the lead guitar (?)

syntax... this is really very interesting!

I don't really know what to say... there are lots of really interesting moods in this little piece.... I suggest to just keep playing on and on and do what you like best... I'd say then there's where the great songs will spring forth from...

keep it up!

uh... don't ever throw anything away!!!!!

It does okay as an intrumental, yes, although lyrics would be nice, even sparse ones.
The mood is beautiful and the song grows and flows with very nice expression throughout. Some of te guitar improvs are off timing-wise and performance-wise and this is a shame because underlying it is a really nice tune and it would be great to hear it played perfectly.
Glad you put this down before throwing it away
Well done.