Okay, so many thank's for the comments on Bulldog walking

Here is another melody. This song has no lyrics yet either. *S*

I'd like to have lyrics to this song also, but I am not so good with words. So if somebody has ideas as to how this could be made with lyrics then drop me a note and we can work on it together. It could perhaps be made a duett with him and her singing together, or then something else*laugh*. Artistic comments most welcome.
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Alright, thank's and hope you enjoy it.

Bobo

very nice song  very catchy tune  I liked it    the ending is good also.......

Flyer7747

not a bad song   I think it need more instrmentals to it....but very nice

Flyer7747

Not a bad tune Bobo - but it's too predictable for me, and doesn't really go anywhere.  It also sounds way too "midi" for me. 

Perhaps less quantizing, and more live playing to give it a more natural sound.

As Jim said, too "MIDI" and predictable. It didn't go anywhere until the very end, which was when it finally caught my interest.

You should have cut way down on the entire song and then built up a lot more with that bit at the end.

Could use a little more variation. The addition of lyrics would aid in this as well as less of a synth feel as mentioned above. Clean progression though