#1February 19th, 2006 · 11:10 AM
8 threads / 8 songs
24 posts
United States of America
Snowbound
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This song is not in a battle


I wrote this after experiencing my first blizzard.  I grew up in Southern California and now I live in the Northeast of the US.  Snow was something that I only saw on TV.  Anyway, I took advantage of my first snow day and wrote this.

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#2February 20th, 2006 · 12:41 AM
117 threads / 55 songs
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Chile
This is weird. It's like the improvisations Peter Gabriel used to do during his concerts with Genesis. In fact, your voice is similar to Gabriel's when he is talking.
But well, I cannot call this a song... sounds more like a strange experiemt. The guitar soudns good, it's a good effect the one you used.
The way you talk is kinda relaxing.
Try to make this more melodical.

      > Iszil
#3February 20th, 2006 · 03:29 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Nice clean effect on the guitar - very bizarre song though!!!
I know what Iszil means about the Genesis thing - I almost expected you to say
      "me, I'm just a lawn-mower,
        you can tell by the way I walk"
It needs a lot more of everything really - but an interesting listen all the same
#4February 21st, 2006 · 05:41 PM
30 threads / 5 songs
757 posts
Australia
Greetings from Sunny Sydney
Back in the old warners loony toon cartoon cabin fever, tweety and sylvester were snowbound in granny's mountain cabin,sylvester couldn't find the can opener for the cans of tuna and started ,you know doing his sylvester thang,
 tweety did his  'bad old puddytat' line ,the world was perfect.
Just thought I'd share that with you. Never having been snowbound ,the memories of that classic toon came flooding back.
Thank you.I liked it.
Take advantage of more blizzard days
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