I was trying to juxtapose the desirable imagery of a kiss with the oh so wrong person.

nice, enjoyable mood this sets. It reminds me of some 60s rock... like the Kinks or so...

I do think however that you should warm up your vocals before you sing I think you know what I mean... but it's an enjoyable tune anyway.

sounds like something you could put on at 4:30 AM when only the sleepover guests from the party are left and on their last drinks...

nice minimalism - it works, funny that 2:17 doubled vocal. lyrics are great. also reminds me of Velvet Underground. there. now I've said it all.

NOthing Puppet hasn't said already... Your vocals REALLY need some work.

The guitar sounds nasty.
You must work on your vocals. I don't like this song, but may be if you make a better production this could improve, but please, work on your voice.

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