| Run Away! |    |
This is a jam I did a while back with my brother and a friend. It's not really a song just a crazy, ripped out of our mind jam but I think it's a fun listen. Its me on Electric/Vocals Sometimes, My Brother on "Supporting" Acoustic/vocals sometimes, and my friends on "main" acoustic. I think you guys will either really enjoy it or hate it so I'm curioius to find out which it will be. Its all 100% improvised by the way to so if it sucks thats my saving grace ahaha. anyway check it out and let me know what you think.
| interesting! |
Hi,
Nice jam session, you should explore further how this could actually become a great song. I like how you build up the theme. It seems artistic!
add drums and bass successively as the song progresses and finish "on the top" with drums bass solo guitar and vocals!that would be great!. And perhaps shorten a little to 4min30 or so. ==>>Great!keep up the good work!
Bobo
Nice jam session, you should explore further how this could actually become a great song. I like how you build up the theme. It seems artistic!
add drums and bass successively as the song progresses and finish "on the top" with drums bass solo guitar and vocals!that would be great!. And perhaps shorten a little to 4min30 or so. ==>>Great!keep up the good work!
Bobo
| interesting! |
Hi,
Nice jam session, you should explore further how this could actually become a great song. I like how you build up the theme. It seems artistic!
add drums and bass successively as the song progresses and finish "on the top" with drums bass solo guitar and vocals!that would be great!. And perhaps shorten a little to 4min30 or so. ==>>Great!keep up the good work!
Bobo
Nice jam session, you should explore further how this could actually become a great song. I like how you build up the theme. It seems artistic!
add drums and bass successively as the song progresses and finish "on the top" with drums bass solo guitar and vocals!that would be great!. And perhaps shorten a little to 4min30 or so. ==>>Great!keep up the good work!
Bobo
Can't say I really enjoyed it but I certainly don't hate it. Sounds like you've come up with the skeleton of a good song. Like Bobo says, some restructuring and shaping and this could be pretty good. There's definitely a few good ideas in amongst it all. I'd really suggest taking some time (probably quite a lot of time) building it into a cohesive unit and fleshing it out. I think it's worth the work.
| Hmmmm |
I don't entirely believe that was all improvised I'm afraid. It sounds very very fake indeed when the guy shouts "don't stop man". Unless that's just my poor interpretation of an American accent.
Anyway, that's my little rant over. It's a decent enough melody you've got going which I'm sure could be turned into something. The singing is pretty awful though. Sorry.
Anyway, that's my little rant over. It's a decent enough melody you've got going which I'm sure could be turned into something. The singing is pretty awful though. Sorry.
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