Hey Guys...
I recorded this song 2 years bak...when i was a 9th grade kid...Damn...The other day...i just found it on my pc...and it was a great feeling...to hear it once again...Aneways...inspired from Tom Morello's style of playing...the whammy and all...have a listen...worth listening...lol

Hey man this kicks ####!!!! Very R.A.T.M. , actually maybe TOO MUCH like them but still very cool, very good whammy bar technique and a nice chunky funky riff! Sweeeeeet!!!

Hey, nice metal song!
You have some very powerful riffs here. The playing is pretty good. The sounds of the guitar is also good. That fat bass sounds really cool. I wonder how you made it...
The structure of the song is really good; you have a good notion of how to make the structure of the song.
Another question: How you made those hi-pitched slides at the beginning?
Overall a good metal song.

        > Iszil

OK, this is a pretty good song that has just enough going on to hold my interest....just!

It really seriously needs vocals!! 
Add a decent vocal line, sung by someone who can do the metal scream, and this would be the dog's hairy's!!
 

For a 9th grader- pretty damn good. I love the main riff. Nice structure too. Well worth the listen, caertainly. I support the call for vocals of course. Would you think of resurrecting this piece and recording it again? I'd say it's worth it.

What do they teach in grade 9?
Excellent .
Now I wanna Rock.

The break at 0:56 reminds me of Audioslave. Cool song.