Hey everyone. This is one of the tracks off an EP I'm recording.

VERSE 1

Where's this little idea gunna grow from here?
It's a tree I care for,
And everyday I rejoice.

Safe in the knowledge that with every choice,
I build a new life for myself.

PRECHORUS

Don't you understand,
That it's already planned,
It's nothing to do with the steps that we take...

CHORUS

But I,
I have a voice,
And I'm gunna sing you till spring,
Then I'll watch you grow wings and depart.

But it won't be long,
Till you carry on,
With the life that we built with you right from the start.

VERSE 2

When's our fate gunna levitate?
We're stuck in limbo,
Wanting to explore our range.

Standing akimbo,
Like a superhero,
Waiting for something to change.

PRECHORUS

Don't you understand,
That it's already planned,
It's nothing to do with the steps that we take...

CHORUS

But I,
I have a voice,
And I'm gunna sing you till spring,
Then I'll watch you grow wings and depart.

But it won't be long,
Till you carry on,
With the life that we built with you right from the start.

Hmmm......

   I like it...   although, I am not sure about the last verse....  Words aren't too bad, but I think you may have overdone the dramatic effect just a tad...  I like the idea, but think maybe it is too much...   take it down a notch I think...   I dunno, may be just me...   But I think this is really a good song, too intellectual for a single, but definitely ep ready...
 
                            JimK

I don't think its too much effect, but I think it needs more instruments not to sound like that. It's nice to hear u use u're voice like this because more often u don't use that much power in it: or its just the recording...

/Denize

Man, loved the guitar arrangements... I wish I could play like you.
Loved the vocals and lyrics.
I have nothing more to said I had say before.
Just that I wait for more of your work.

      > Iszil

If WOW comes from Wonderful then I say: WOW!

Thanks Triton, I think it's my favourite yet.

- Chester

Fabulous again Chester, well done.  Nice sound to the guitar, and lovely vocal line.
Great

Wonderful lyric technique. I'm really a fan mostly bc of your writing style. Great job, once again.

This is a nice tune. I really like the chords you use with the melody. This is well written.
Another good song by you.

Great arrangement(esp. the guitar )Only thing I don't like is the first verse.It was probably intentional but for me I think its to soft and whispery(personal taste)So is this what is to be expected from your upcoming uploads?I hope so,I really enjoy your guitar playing.

I love the progression in this song. I like how you're vocals go high and low. The guitar goes really nice with the vocals. The only thing i dislike of this song is the ending, it's to abrupt! Anyways nice one.

Very lovely I think:)I like it so mutch:)