this is a song ive been playin for a while now. it helps me relax when im depressed or when i just want to mellow out. ive been playin for 3 years 10 months, and this is one of my favorite songs. i finally recorded it and threw in a lot of reverb it give it an airy/flowy sound, and i really like the way it came out, tell me what you think, constructive criticism is best

thanks
Darien

it's beautiful

the airyness definately works, this could be a backing track to some art film. I think it's a job well done.

So - well done!

Don't know... That's the most used chords progression all around the world, so to listen it again here on BandAMP isn't  good for me. The playing is good, the effect as well, but you must do something with it to make notes sound more clear cause they sounds to airy.
May be a good solo could make it a bit more interesting... that's my point of view as a guitarist.

      > Iszil

I imagine a slightly flight through the norwegian fjords where the greens are playing with the light of the sun in the clear blue sky. A flute would be great on the chords.

as a playing/recording exercise this is fine

keep practising................i look forward to more of your compositions on bandamp

listen 2 what is being posted ..............enjoy

splash

no vote yet................