The first song for piano I've recorded.  Now I understand why it's better to record with a real piano.

This has such a great potential and if this was released by some commercial artist it would have been a smash hit song!!!!!! Great, beautiful !    And the piano sounds just fine. Consider me your fan

Charming lyrics, I suppose, in a simple sort of way.  One idea I had... When you sing "I could write you a symphony" maybe you could, either subtly or not, briefly add some sort of string instrument line.  Violin, Cello, Both, Whatever.  Might be a nice effect, much in the way that you add the harmony to the vox at 3:00.

I like the good old piano-and-vox tune, though.  Nice work.  This would probably be a powerful "smitten with you" song with a second recording, even without a studio recording.  Just mic that baby grand and lose the popped "p's", and you've got some girl named Sara blushing.  

Beautiful Song!  I too would prefer the sound of a real piano to the synth... but you can really play that thing.  Nice expression and shaping of the phrases.  The song gives a nice picture of what is going on...  you know... a story line.  I also think that you could blend in some simple string melodies in half notes in the background.... A's, G's and F-sharps.  This song's style is beautiful and it almost reminds me of an Irish ballad.   Terrific Job!  I definitely want to hear more from you.

This song, to me, is fine the way it is. The piano part is absolutely beautiful.
Now, if you wanted to improve it, I would not change the song from the way it is, but instead add on a part that brings in a climax. I can imagine a suspended cymbal or a violin coming in and then the rest of the symphony, referring to the line about writing a symphony in the lyrics.

Touching. Loved it.
Although i did hear a wrong note or two at 1:55
But relax it takes a finely tuned ear, such as mine, to notice things like that. The casual listener will still love it.

It's a 6-7 dissonance, actually, at 1:55...

Maybe it doesn't work.  But traditional harmonies can be so boring.

why did I miss this wonderful tune?
Did you think about rerecord the piano with a real instrument?
Please DO!

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there is nothing wrong at 1:55

Hey this is great. Super potential I am really enjoying this. Yeah a touch of a cello or something might make it more fuller.

Okay I am probably sounding like a newbie for this next question...but here it goes:
Everyone on here is always saying "I love your vox" or "Great vox" or "add some vox" and I know there is a line of VOX Amps and pedals and stuff But I have no Idea what the heck you mean or are talking about.

What do you guys mean when you say "When you add harmony to the vox" and stuff like that?
Help...please?

Vox is short for Vocals, it's a lazy thing that people pick up and can't get rid of when talking about vocals.  I'm not exactly sure where it originated.  But Wikipedia might have an article on the origin.

I'm listening to the song for the second time now, I am very impressed. The lyrics could maybe use a bit of refinement (even though I kind of like the little silly bits).  The music is very emotionally evocative, I really like it!
If you get a chance to record this on a real piano it would be GREAT!!  not that it isn't already great.
altogether I love the song, it's really stirring.

You're good at this. Love songs in this style are probably becoming a cliche now, but I think you've put a lot into this. This is good.

The recording is good, but it has too much bass on the vocals.