Charming lyrics, I suppose, in a simple sort of way. One idea I had... When you sing "I could write you a symphony" maybe you could, either subtly or not, briefly add some sort of string instrument line. Violin, Cello, Both, Whatever. Might be a nice effect, much in the way that you add the harmony to the vox at 3:00.
I like the good old piano-and-vox tune, though. Nice work. This would probably be a powerful "smitten with you" song with a second recording, even without a studio recording. Just mic that baby grand and lose the popped "p's", and you've got some girl named Sara blushing.
I like the good old piano-and-vox tune, though. Nice work. This would probably be a powerful "smitten with you" song with a second recording, even without a studio recording. Just mic that baby grand and lose the popped "p's", and you've got some girl named Sara blushing.

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Beautiful Song! I too would prefer the sound of a real piano to the synth... but you can really play that thing. Nice expression and shaping of the phrases. The song gives a nice picture of what is going on... you know... a story line. I also think that you could blend in some simple string melodies in half notes in the background.... A's, G's and F-sharps. This song's style is beautiful and it almost reminds me of an Irish ballad. Terrific Job! I definitely want to hear more from you.
This song, to me, is fine the way it is. The piano part is absolutely beautiful.
Now, if you wanted to improve it, I would not change the song from the way it is, but instead add on a part that brings in a climax. I can imagine a suspended cymbal or a violin coming in and then the rest of the symphony, referring to the line about writing a symphony in the lyrics.
Touching. Loved it.
Although i did hear a wrong note or two at 1:55
But relax it takes a finely tuned ear, such as mine, to notice things like that. The casual listener will still love it.
Now, if you wanted to improve it, I would not change the song from the way it is, but instead add on a part that brings in a climax. I can imagine a suspended cymbal or a violin coming in and then the rest of the symphony, referring to the line about writing a symphony in the lyrics.
Touching. Loved it.
Although i did hear a wrong note or two at 1:55

But relax it takes a finely tuned ear, such as mine, to notice things like that. The casual listener will still love it.
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And the piano sounds just fine. Consider me your fan