Just a little acoustic blues song, there's two guitar parts, but I just recorded both of them.  If you have any suggestions for improvement I would love to hearm them, as I would like to get better.

not bad,your timing is a bit off from one guitar to the other,nothing a good beat cant help (or metronome)i can hear what your trying to accomplish w/this.i dig the laid back atmosphere.(you and i have similiar playing style)i'll keep a watch for more posts!good job.....

Nice atmosphere, but still I can't see where the song is going... you could try to work on a "direction" for the song.

I also like it...
But some singing would help it, definitely. That might give it a direction too, if u have good lyrics.

Very nice guitar work....  though the recording quality isn't very good... but other than that,  it has a nice relaxed feel... very soulful.... and it is a jam, so I will not ding you for no direction, axcept that you said it has two parts, but you recorded both, so I am confused... Are you saying this is a predetermined song with two specific guitar parts, that you played? or do you mean there is a general idea of two guitars jamming, and complimenting each other, and you just played both parts for this recording....

  anyway.... I do like this very much....  Lyrics would spoil this, because it's a great jam...

                           JimK

It is just the general idea of two guitars jamming with each other, and I just played both parts for the recording.  It is really the first song I recorded so don't be too harsh

we'll go easy on you...

but we won't play it on the radio just yet...


there's definately a nice feel to this. this is much like how I started too... 13 years ago.

keep it up. you'll gradually develope over time, so keep posting your stuff here, that's what this site is for. critiques are meant to help you out in the process of growth...

Well, sounds good, but solos need more work.

      > Iszil

Good stuff. Not bad for a jam out.  Try to use a metronome next time and try to hum something over it when you listen to it. You will be amazed what you can come up for vocals. And then when you get a humming or vocals over it you will be able to write different riffs that mend with the new vocal parts. It's a form of writing I've used in the past. Good work though. Keep it up.