I'm finally happy with the end product with this one. This is an instrumental which means my vocals can't spoil it. The actual performances were a little improvised and there are a few mistakes which could have been tidied up but nothing glaring I hope. I spent many, many hours mixing and producing this and I'm hoping it shows.
Anyway, enjoy! (hopefully)
All opinions and criticisms welcome and requested.
Thanks.

Very good!  The music really gives the feeling of being caught on (and in) a wave!

The time spent on this arrangement definitely does show.  I don't think I can say any more really.

Well done

This is a great song! I can tell that you spent a lot of time on it and it payed off, well done!!!

vary  nice i love the mix of syth to overdrive in a haze of harmony    vary nicely done the time shows it self in every change of rhythm

Thanks for your comments. I appreciate them alot. If anyone at all enjoys the song then it's worth the time

The song itself came together fairly quickly but the production took forever and I still feel it's not yet right. Does anyone have any ideas about improving the sound? I feel that it should maybe be a bit brighter- it sounds a little too bassy (especially through headphones, although I think it sounds best through headphones).

I'd appreciate any pointers. Please, nitpick away!

I do agree with you a bit, that it is kind of missing some brightness...  Although I wouldn't go too bright, would detract from the thing I like most oabout th song.. the mood....   Brightness will change that...   I almost feel it is safer to leave it as is...
           JimK

Great song. Between Progressive and Metal.
Cool arrangements. Loved the sound. Yeah, this is great... close to my style.
Wait for more.

      > Iszil

Love the harmonies on the guitars.  Definitley a dark sounding song, something i could really get into and zone out with.