first song i did in studio i wrote and performed all parts as well as arranged and mixed everything please keep comments coming i appreciate all of them

I like this, well, I mostly like the song - but something's not quite right in the sound.  I can't exactly put my finger on it though!

For a start, some of the instruments (bass, and drums mainly) are just too clean, and don't quite blend with the other sounds.  I like the whining vocal melody, I'm not especially fond of the distortion that you add to the voice, but that's a minor thing.

Yes, this is a good song, that probably needs to be arranged a mixed slightly better.  I know you say it was your first song in a studio and you did everything basically, so actually it's pretty good going!

Great Bull horn sound on vocals, I like the recording with exception to the drums. The sound a little thin. The song is great I like the dark feel.