#1January 23rd, 2006 · 10:51 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand

This song is not in a battle

Probably the weirdest song I've ever written. And I screwed up in it so I only got halfway through. But this is the only recording of it. So deal with it.


There's a mouth on the ground,
Out of breath, out of sound.
There it lies in wait for a face,
Strung out on lipgloss and toothpaste.

There are eyes on the floor,
Eyelid ruins attatched no more.
Vacant stare, too sad to sleep,
All dried out, too tired to weep.


My face is falling apart,
It's been days since human interaction.
My lips to lonely to part,
Other features to perform any other action.


There's a nose......

Haha. Yeah. Well.

Does this song not follow the Rules? Please Report Abuse
#2January 24th, 2006 · 12:58 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Fabulous - again!

You're not wrong about the weirdness of it!  But the lyrics make you listen and try to work out what the hell you're talking about!!! Perhaps you have leprosy 

As far as the composition itself is concerned, well this is of a very high standard.  Only let down, in my opinion, by the ending.  The addition of other instruments, perhaps very quiet drums to help carry the guitar along, may give something extra to the song, but I think this actually works superbly as just guitar and voice.

#3January 24th, 2006 · 02:10 PM
7 threads
104 posts
United Kingdom
I'm thinking Salvador Dali would like this one. Surreal without being stupid if u know what I mean. So does that mean we can only vote up to 50% 'cos it's only 1/2 a song ?? lol
#4January 25th, 2006 · 02:54 PM
3 threads / 3 songs
21 posts
United States of America
oooh tasty
#5February 5th, 2006 · 02:34 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
42 posts
Great guitar work.
#6June 17th, 2006 · 06:30 AM
9 threads / 4 songs
209 posts
quite wierd but the guitars are really something.....
#7September 27th, 2006 · 10:36 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
145 posts
United States of America
-It Speaks To Me-
Lmao, outta the whole song, i loved the ending the most  lol idk arroseuk has a point... this is weird lyrically, and maybe even musically lol because of akward chords...But somehow... i still love it...

(im not sure what it says, but it definately speaks to me)

#8November 11th, 2006 · 12:18 PM
31 posts
I love this song, really great, can't wait for you to make a new FULL recording
#9November 11th, 2006 · 06:39 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
I've actually forgotten how to play this one :P Haha, thanks though.

- Chester
#10November 12th, 2006 · 11:43 AM
24 threads
319 posts
hehe weird one... love it
#11March 31st, 2007 · 09:44 AM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
This is actually one of my favourites from you. I like the abstract lyrics. random stuff that people wont understand, and so people can put their own meanings to the lyrics. reminds me a bit of the mars volta lyrics on televators.
 I think you should pursue this idea further.
Sorry, you do not have access to post...
Wanna post? Join Today!

Server Time: April 23rd, 2021 · 9:58 AM
© 2002-2012 BandAMP. All Rights Reserved.