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Probably the weirdest song I've ever written. And I screwed up in it so I only got halfway through. But this is the only recording of it. So deal with it.
VERSE 1
There's a mouth on the ground,
Out of breath, out of sound.
There it lies in wait for a face,
Strung out on lipgloss and toothpaste.
There are eyes on the floor,
Eyelid ruins attatched no more.
Vacant stare, too sad to sleep,
All dried out, too tired to weep.
CHORUS
My face is falling apart,
It's been days since human interaction.
My lips to lonely to part,
Other features to perform any other action.
VERSE 2
There's a nose......
Haha. Yeah. Well.
VERSE 1
There's a mouth on the ground,
Out of breath, out of sound.
There it lies in wait for a face,
Strung out on lipgloss and toothpaste.
There are eyes on the floor,
Eyelid ruins attatched no more.
Vacant stare, too sad to sleep,
All dried out, too tired to weep.
CHORUS
My face is falling apart,
It's been days since human interaction.
My lips to lonely to part,
Other features to perform any other action.
VERSE 2
There's a nose......
Haha. Yeah. Well.
Fabulous - again!
You're not wrong about the weirdness of it! But the lyrics make you listen and try to work out what the hell you're talking about!!! Perhaps you have leprosy
As far as the composition itself is concerned, well this is of a very high standard. Only let down, in my opinion, by the ending. The addition of other instruments, perhaps very quiet drums to help carry the guitar along, may give something extra to the song, but I think this actually works superbly as just guitar and voice.
You're not wrong about the weirdness of it! But the lyrics make you listen and try to work out what the hell you're talking about!!! Perhaps you have leprosy
As far as the composition itself is concerned, well this is of a very high standard. Only let down, in my opinion, by the ending. The addition of other instruments, perhaps very quiet drums to help carry the guitar along, may give something extra to the song, but I think this actually works superbly as just guitar and voice.
Great guitar work.
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Lmao, outta the whole song, i loved the ending the most 
lol idk arroseuk has a point... this is weird lyrically, and maybe even musically lol because of akward chords...But somehow... i still love it...
(im not sure what it says, but it definately speaks to me)
lol idk arroseuk has a point... this is weird lyrically, and maybe even musically lol because of akward chords...But somehow... i still love it...(im not sure what it says, but it definately speaks to me)
I've actually forgotten how to play this one :P Haha, thanks though.
- Chester
- Chester
This is actually one of my favourites from you. I like the abstract lyrics. random stuff that people wont understand, and so people can put their own meanings to the lyrics. reminds me a bit of the mars volta lyrics on televators.
I think you should pursue this idea further.
I think you should pursue this idea further.
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