The first thing you'll probably notice in this song is I sing quite high. And I do. Sorry. Haha.

This is one of my all time favourites, but my family and friends aren't too amped on it. They think it's pretty middle of the road. It's up to you really. Just thought I'd put it out there.

VERSE 1:

Split the distance,
Find the difference,
Between numbers,
One and two.

Shadows flicker,
Peel a sticker,
Off a public,
Bathroom wall.

CHORUS:

Tell me mr was-somebody,
How'd you pass your time?
'Cause life is fast and yours has passed,
Teach me how to not go wasting mine.

VERSE 2:

Tracing light beams through,
Dusty skylit rooms,
With stationairy weary,
Staring eyes.

Holding onto nothing,
Lost in sunken mystery,
Crushing,
Down upon me.

CHORUS:

Tell me mr was-somebody,
How'd you pass your time?
'Cause life is fast and yours has passed,
Teach me how to not go wasting mine.

You have a lot of talent writing for keys; if the oppurtunity comes to add more instruments into the mix, TAKE IT!
Your voice is also very nice.

I cannot stop to adore your work!
You are great man! I wish I had the talent you have!
Your songs are incredible, and this is not the exception.
Keep this up! Still making my ears enjoy your music!

      > Iszil

I love the piano in this song. Very well done darling.

Mmmm, this is a sweet piece of candy for the ears....



Love it

Beautiful song it made me silent and wanting to hear every part of the song every word you sing and I wouldn't add more instruments I love just a voice and a piano I think it's more emotional in that way well done

nice..

its simple

 i like it

Bring the piano forward, it's too quite.
I like your voice and all (you too good for anyone to diss it, tho u obviously stuggled a bit here;)) but it's sounds dijointed from the piano.
Beutifull peice though.

Another nice song. Right on!!!! I like how you alternate between writing the songs on the guitar and the piano! Like having you on the myspace too!!! Weeeeeeeeeeeeee 

This song isn't even in a battle! Why the sudden bizarre interest in it!? Haha, thanks though

- Chester

Not much to add really.
Only that it's a really good song!
Cheers

wow, i have been listening to your songs on here and cant find one i dont like..im amazed that you arent famous yet, cuz trust me you could be...im commenting on this song, but i think evergreen is the best song you've written. Keep up the awesome work..

P.S. Please put this on your myspace...