#1January 18th, 2006 · 09:19 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
Wasted Life
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This song is not in a battle


The first thing you'll probably notice in this song is I sing quite high. And I do. Sorry. Haha.

This is one of my all time favourites, but my family and friends aren't too amped on it. They think it's pretty middle of the road. It's up to you really. Just thought I'd put it out there.

VERSE 1:

Split the distance,
Find the difference,
Between numbers,
One and two.

Shadows flicker,
Peel a sticker,
Off a public,
Bathroom wall.

CHORUS:

Tell me mr was-somebody,
How'd you pass your time?
'Cause life is fast and yours has passed,
Teach me how to not go wasting mine.

VERSE 2:

Tracing light beams through,
Dusty skylit rooms,
With stationairy weary,
Staring eyes.

Holding onto nothing,
Lost in sunken mystery,
Crushing,
Down upon me.

CHORUS:

Tell me mr was-somebody,
How'd you pass your time?
'Cause life is fast and yours has passed,
Teach me how to not go wasting mine.

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#2January 18th, 2006 · 09:46 PM
42 threads / 1 songs
556 posts
United States of America
You have a lot of talent writing for keys; if the oppurtunity comes to add more instruments into the mix, TAKE IT!
Your voice is also very nice.
#3January 18th, 2006 · 10:19 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
Chile
I cannot stop to adore your work!
You are great man! I wish I had the talent you have!
Your songs are incredible, and this is not the exception.
Keep this up! Still making my ears enjoy your music!

      > Iszil
#4March 22nd, 2006 · 12:29 PM
25 posts
United States of America
I love the piano in this song. Very well done darling.
#5September 27th, 2006 · 10:26 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
145 posts
United States of America
Mmmm, this is a sweet piece of candy for the ears....



Love it
#6October 3rd, 2006 · 02:58 PM
15 posts
Belgium
Beautiful song it made me silent and wanting to hear every part of the song every word you sing and I wouldn't add more instruments I love just a voice and a piano I think it's more emotional in that way well done
#7October 4th, 2006 · 11:13 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
nice..

its simple

 i like it
#8October 4th, 2006 · 07:02 PM
21 threads
235 posts
United Kingdom
Bring the piano forward, it's too quite.
I like your voice and all (you too good for anyone to diss it, tho u obviously stuggled a bit here;)) but it's sounds dijointed from the piano.
Beutifull peice though.
#9October 4th, 2006 · 11:10 PM
22 threads / 19 songs
234 posts
Canada
Another nice song. Right on!!!! I like how you alternate between writing the songs on the guitar and the piano! Like having you on the myspace too!!! Weeeeeeeeeeeeee 
#10October 5th, 2006 · 05:04 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
This song isn't even in a battle! Why the sudden bizarre interest in it!? Haha, thanks though

- Chester
#11October 6th, 2006 · 02:19 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Not much to add really.
Only that it's a really good song!
Cheers
#12December 24th, 2006 · 05:51 PM
1 posts
United States of America
wow, i have been listening to your songs on here and cant find one i dont like..im amazed that you arent famous yet, cuz trust me you could be...im commenting on this song, but i think evergreen is the best song you've written. Keep up the awesome work..

P.S. Please put this on your myspace...
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