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Ya, the end stereo chorus deal is quite a harmonic tidal wave (at least w/ headphones), maybe fade into it instead of hurling into the tune.

I like the intro rhythmic chord progression but then things start to get weird. There is way too much going on which makes a nice sort of groove turn into a brown muddy mess. You should try to find a theme and bring that out without creating too many distractions in the background.

Man towards the end there is like this stereo chorus thing goin on. WOW! big sound, I like that!

thanks a lot for your appreciation , I agree with you there is disonant weird sound in there that make the things a bit messy , I keep thinking my idea was good but maybe not well compose with that particular sound.  The chord I used were totally 'invent' (what are these chords ?) and I was influence by redhotchilipepeprs , by the way album to do this song. 

The end of the song was made with my cheap effect pedal  , and I kind of trick the echo sound with my guitar playing to make it like that .. Im glad you like it

its aight.. lead guitar is not such a good player.. by the way TUNE YOUR GUITAR WITH A TUNER B4 u record.. good song tho

A bit of a mess. It's cool to have layers, but for God's sake layer them, don't have them all competing for our attention at the same volume.

There is definately room on this song for what you have on it, they just need to find their place.  You might want to play around with the chords you invented and see if some more "standard" chords sound better

needs alot of work my friend, but that is what it's all about.

Good idea but there's something wrong, as others wrote before me. Maybe it's something in the guitar effect more than the tuning...

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like very much but very messy . work on new methods of improvosing(i assume this is what lead guitar is doing)