It's "A Name Like Toblerone" it just wouldn't fit it all in.

I wrote aobut this woman down our hill who is like 30, but looks about 70. Sad sad story. So I wrote this song. Which probably has nothing to do with her, but was inspired by her.

VERSE 1:

Severed fingernails beneath the teeth she bites them with,
A silver bangle dangling from her wrist.
Knuckles white and hard from years of smoking cigarettes,
She doesn't have that long (I think you get the gist)

She's a sinker,
On a fishing wire.

VERSE 2:

She's this crooked little easel of a girl,
Clumps of hair they tear and fall about the place.
And when she smiles (which isn't often, and it takes a while)
It's like her lips against the grain of her face.

She's a sinker,
And she's cast away.

VERSE 3:

She has a name because her mother called her Toblerone,
She has a dog which she just calls Dog.
And when it yelps it coughs and splutters through the living room,
And wades its way into the niccotene fog.

She's a sinker,
She's a sinker,
She's a sinker,

And she's sinking down,

Here.

Just Beautiful!
Don't know what to say man, but just that you are awesome!
Keep this up...gonna make a CD with your music.

      > Iszil

Oh, get to Chat room, so then I can talk with the genius.

      > Iszil

Great lyrics and a beautiful song.  Your talent shines right through it.  I will have to listen to all of your songs now.

Yes, Beautiful, Man you're talented....and as i said before  you really have a nice voice...another masterpiece from you

very very nice

emotion beautifully transferred

thank you

i'll never look at the wife in the same way

dives into a vat of remorse
i have a name very like toblerone!!!
splosh

the fish

We have a few local open stages where I live. Come and play for us. Please!

A very simple song, lovely melody and lyrics and tasteful guitar playing. Nicely done.

Beautiful. Really nice melody great vocals... need to hear more.

Very beautiful....

   Absolutely perfect.... can't say enough good about it....  I could feel this song....

   You really made a grade A perfect song here......
                           JimK

you have talent and i like you, aaawww.

top notch song! smooth and original.

thanks for give a chance to find new places in this big world. I like the music and the lyrics, really thank you, great song

Incredible song EG - you're really talented!

I love the sound of the guitar and your voice - is it recorded live? It's just that sometimes it sounds like you turn your mouth a little away from the mic, maybe to look down on the chords?!? - don't know if it's so, just a thought.

I also really dig your lyrics - you really master the technique of "Don't tell it - show it" - you use the melody like a canvas a portraits this woman to the listener - and very effectively - I'm impressed.

Would really love to hear it produced with more instruments... hope you have a some guys around you, so you can play your songs with a backing band.... Then all you need is a live audience and you're reaching for the stars...

I'm getting chills that reminds me of early John Mayer...

Kazpa

Thanks everyone

Early john mayer?! Awesome.

- Chester

Bingoed my mood man!
I wanted to hear something soft and you gave me it...
the song is so beautiful...