I was 15. Still learning to play guitar. There's something so magnetic about raw material.

- Chester

your on the right track with this,buddy.a bit of polish and you can make it shine.good job!I understand circumstances sometimes hold us back from elaborating on our material ,i truly feel this has potential.would like to hear a more refined version.

Sounds very relaxing . I hear a lot of feeling .

Oooh, squeaky, squeaky!!  Hehe 

I wished I'd had that much talent at 15!  The song is simplistic, but very good all the same.  This is a window into your other songs in terms of vocal performance and style.

i like the song............its very tender................

fragile...................

maybe try to process the sounds with reverb / delay to thicken up/seperate the vocal.............i love the mood

bring up the drums a little?

thank you for a moment of tranquility

the fish

I like the guitar part. The intro is a little long, nice melody though. Only real criticism would be that that guitar part gets a little annoying after some time. It seems like it could use a really definative chorus or bridge to make some good contrast.

Beautiful!
If you don't mind me asking, who is it written about?
Your voice is really soothing.
I like all the stuff I've listened to of yours.

I like it. You're really good. 

I wish I had this much talent at 15...heck I'm nearing 18 now and I still dont have this much talent.

Nice work, just remove that annoying amp buzz in the background somehow.

A good song overall shame about the buzz but nothing a bit of production can't get rid of

I love this style of acoustic song!  Great up close vocals.  good mood. the lyric and melody fit the feel of the song.  Keep up  the good work!

get back to your beginnings.. it's very kewl..
hell all but the cello and violin, your beginning
sounds allot like mine..  piano from age 4,
trombone in school at 10 and guitar at 11...
glad you were able to do something with it
bro!! Congrats and Good Luck!! 

This is awesome for a first shot!!  you
are very talented bro!!  hope you the
best from now on!!


Blessings,

Danny - Blueyes

I like the laid back feel.