#1January 13th, 2006 · 02:33 PM
21 threads / 21 songs
72 posts
Vanja Van Sky

This song is not in a battle

It's about a Girl I get to know a few days ago. I talked a lot to her and she inspired me to write this song.
It's dedicated to her.
She sent me something she has written and I converted it into music. I used a few phrases from her and the picture that living has something to do with being a vampire... 
The Name has a funny relation to the Netherlands I think... 
Thought about naming it "Vampire". Have to think it over.

Proud that Hell Mood played again this beautiful bass line. Thanks a lot.
Maybe I'll get someone for drums again.... Let's see
...and be aware. Vocals are dangerous

Lyrics are.

Vanja van Sky

Vanja van Sky looks in the mirror and asks herself
am I free? and what if I already lived my dreams?
Vanja van Sky smokes the world and fades away
the glamour in her eyes when she understands

it is my life
and I'll burning like a flame
'till cold fume absorbed
the passion in my heart

I will dazzle
I will shine
The gravity won't stop my wish to fly
I'll pine over
until the source of my blood thirst runs dry 

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#2January 14th, 2006 · 01:44 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
42 posts
I like it it's dark, and moody. I would like to hear a finished version. It reminds me of the smiths.
#3January 14th, 2006 · 01:52 AM
7 threads / 5 songs
20 posts
United States of America
The way the vocals are set almost behind the guitar and bass works.  I don't like it, but it works (as in, I can see that it's good, just not my usual style of music).  The bass' prominence is fantastic, and holds up most of the dark character of the song, especially when you switch over to distortion.

The lyrics are good, but I don't think the growling works for them in the final lines.  The tone you had with them in the beginning was perfect.
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