I wrote it in Indonesia's words.. I created the lyric with my second sister whom I love so much..music by me, and violin was played by my 1st sister.

Nice melody. Well played and singed.
You have a nice voice and that violin ( that didn't sounded like a real violin, sorry, more like a oboe)
but it makes it work. The song is good.
Keep this up.

      > Iszil

I really like the mood in the song in any language.

The production quality on this is astounding (from a home-recording perspective, anyway).  I agree with Iszil on the violin - it works, but it sounds more like a woodwind.  From an Indie standpoint, I like it better.

I'm a fan of the consistent fourth on the final two guitar strings to anchor the song as well.

beautiful song-applause!!

Really beautiful song.... I can really feel it.......


 I agree that it does not come through well, but I believe it is just due to a poor quality recording, the playing is first rate....  She is very talented...  Your vocals are great...
        Tell your 1st sister I think she plays very well..
                                JimK

Man this deserves to be brought back up.Awesome feel my friend great mood setting piece.You should do some more for us to listen!!!! Good job!