Yeah! This pretty metal, but is well constructed.
The drums sound really horrible; can recommend you to use Acoustica Beatcraft... used it for my last song Progressive and sounds pretty good.
You have some nice guitar work on this.
Try to improve the sound. Some stereo work could be great ( I'm talking like PuppetXeno...lol), and tray to re-equalize the guitar man! In the 3 min part my ears begun to ache...uff, a relaxed part... that's better.
Keep rocking man.
> Iszil
The drums sound really horrible; can recommend you to use Acoustica Beatcraft... used it for my last song Progressive and sounds pretty good.
You have some nice guitar work on this.
Try to improve the sound. Some stereo work could be great ( I'm talking like PuppetXeno...lol), and tray to re-equalize the guitar man! In the 3 min part my ears begun to ache...uff, a relaxed part... that's better.
Keep rocking man.
> Iszil
ya haha I guess I'm always telling people that they should improve their sound. well I guess that's fairly obvious in this case too.
droning fake double bass drum from 0:58 till 1:24 (and again later on) makes for an unexpected industrial feel. I feel the urge to cut it out and use it in some sort of soundscape collage.
I think this is all pretty much a draft with different parts that could work, were they tied together better. it's not really cohesive at this point. just violently jumps from one part to the other. and some of the parts have an interesting feel to it, however you should definately work on your recording technique, the results are far from what they should be.
so, keep working on it, you have an interesting taste in music.
droning fake double bass drum from 0:58 till 1:24 (and again later on) makes for an unexpected industrial feel. I feel the urge to cut it out and use it in some sort of soundscape collage.
I think this is all pretty much a draft with different parts that could work, were they tied together better. it's not really cohesive at this point. just violently jumps from one part to the other. and some of the parts have an interesting feel to it, however you should definately work on your recording technique, the results are far from what they should be.
so, keep working on it, you have an interesting taste in music.
This is like 2 different metallica songs mixed with a couple megadeth songs... the riffs are so similar, the drums are very poor.... Definetly needs redone...
Overall I have to say same ole same ole... that is until it switches to some weird psychadelic acid trip.... very odd.... Please don't take offense, but this song flips too much, and the riffs are way to similar to a couple metallica and megadeth songs... I would try changing them up a bit, hardto do with this type of death metal sound I know, but also don't flip quite so extreme, it would flow better... although fits the name of the song well, asylum overdose... perhaps with some more original riffs,and better drums, the song might be better.....
it is a good idea, you have talent...
JimK
Overall I have to say same ole same ole... that is until it switches to some weird psychadelic acid trip.... very odd.... Please don't take offense, but this song flips too much, and the riffs are way to similar to a couple metallica and megadeth songs... I would try changing them up a bit, hardto do with this type of death metal sound I know, but also don't flip quite so extreme, it would flow better... although fits the name of the song well, asylum overdose... perhaps with some more original riffs,and better drums, the song might be better.....
it is a good idea, you have talent...
JimK
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My neck hurts from head banging so much. This is the heavyest I've heard on here so far. I like it. Good stuff man. I like death metal to Classical and I can see what you were doing here. Keep it up man. I'll up load some of my metal stuff onto here and tell me what you think. It's not as heavy and has more of a grunge feel to it but maybe you will like some of it. Keep Thrashing man.
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